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DON'T READ THIS IF YOU HAVEN'T SEEN MY VIDEO. JUST KEEP SCROLLING PAST THIS POST...Well... now that I've watched it about 100 times all the way through I noticed some small things that bug me, that I would change if I were to work on it some more.
1: The lighting leaves a bad ring that is noticeable at the end of the sequence.
2: The bridge on the glasses has no shadow
3: Camera Pan on the 3rd illustration (keys/mountains) to the 4th (Voltaire #6) Isn't good enough.
4: I would have liked the perfume to be more visible
5: The Jason Schwartzman animation is weak on timing and effect.
6: The perfume puff lingers a bit longer than I'd like after the title fades away.
Call me bi-polar. Or sleep deprived.
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